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The author proposes to restore the time in their late-night news program devoted to weather and local news to the former level. To support his/ her proposal, the writer quotes two facts. One is that over the past year, most of the received complaints from the viewers were about the coverage of local news and weather. Another is the decreased advertising revenue from local businesses. Quite convincing though the argument seem at the first glance, however, the statement lacks critical support and therefore we need further evidence to help evaluate the proposal.

First of all, the writer claims that during last year, most of the complaints were about the coverage of weather and local news. It is possible that the decreased time spent on local news and weather leads to more complaints. However, currently we have no idea about the nature of the complaints. It might be the case that the audience were complaining about the quality of the content related to the local news and weather. They might be unsatisfied with the low accuracy of the weather report. Moreover, further more specific information about the content of the complaints will be helpful to determine whether viewers were truly complaining about the shortened length of the segment in night-news edition or just even about the other programs during the day. Thus, further surveys and data will be necessary to know what the audience are truly caring about. Sometimes it is the personalities and the chemistry of the news anchors that govern people's decisions about which station's news they watch. The business manager will never know unless he asks the viewers exactly why they do or do not enjoy watching his news program.

In addition, the argument attributes the lost advertising revenue from the local businesses to the shortened segments of local news and weather as well. As far as I am concerned, the conclusion may be too naive and lacking of evidence. Without further information and evidence, we cannot know the exact reason of the lost revenue. It is possible that the local businesses just found out that the advertisement in their program did not contribute much to their profitability, therefore in order to cut the costs, they withdrew the money spent on the late-night news. It also might be the case that the local businesses built connection with other programs or they were losing money these years and therefore had to cut costs on the advertisement. If the manager could establish that businesses discontinued advertising contracts specifically because they were displeased with the change in news coverage, and that the remaining advertisers are on the verge of leaving if coverage of weather and local news is not increased, that information would help eliminate other possible explanations. Otherwise, we have no reason to anticipate more advertising revenue only after increasing the time devoted to local news and weather.

Evidence that research had been conducted to find specific ways to attract viewers to a news program would also strengthen the argument. Moreover, findings from research about what viewers would like to see on the program may help. Data about which ratings are highest and what people are watching would assist the business manager in his or her decision about how to change the program.

To sum up, it is possible that they could drive the advertising revenue and attract more audience by restore the time devoted to local news and weather. However, there are other possibilities and without further evidence, we cannot evaluate which is the most possible one.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3007.0 2235.4752809 135% => OK
No of words: 588.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11394557823 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65812082957 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41156462585 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 930.6 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0237698185 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.653846154 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42307692308 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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