Over recent decades, a reduction in the number of graduates choosing to become classroom teachers has been reported. The reasons for this worrying trend clearly need to be analysed, and ways of encouraging university-leavers to enter the teaching profession have to be found.
The fall in popularity of teaching is related to economic and social factors, as well as health concerns. Firstly, salaries paid by schools are comparatively low. Well-qualified graduates can usually earn more by working in the financial sector, industry or even tourism. In addition, teachers no longer benefit from the respect they previously enjoyed. Those working in education used to have the same social status as lawyers, doctors and scientists. This is not now the case. Finally, the job seems extremely unattractive. Potential teachers are put off by the thought of long working hours and disruptive students. It is widely acknowledged that many working in primary schools or secondary education suffer from stress, depression and other mental and emotional conditions.
A range of strategies might be used to arrest this decline. Firstly, Ministers of Education should give teachers a pay-rise or offer financial incentives to newly-qualified recruits or those who prove to be successful. This would make the profession a more attractive proposition. In addition, governments ought to launch awareness-raising campaigns to remind the general public about the importance and value of teachers. This might begin to restore teachers' status as valued citizens. Finally, steps could be taken to reduce the workload of teaching staff and give them powers to discipline poorly-behaved children. This could make teaching a far more pleasant experience.
In conclusion, measures could be introduced to reverse this trend and raise the number of applicants for jobs in schools. However, I am not wildly optimistic that governments will priorities this issue. It seems likely that there will be an ongoing decline in both the quality and the quantity of teachers. From everyone’s perspective, this is a shame.
- Nowadays many big cities become overcrowded Why is it happening in your opinion What measures could be taken to prevent it 73
- Many people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life whereas others prefer tochange the type of work Discuss both sides and state your own opinion 78
- Some people believe that parents should limit their children hours of watching tv and playing computer games but encourage to read books Do you agree or disagree 84
- Nowadays cultures of different countries are becoming more similar than they used to be What are the reason Is it a positive or a negative development Give your own opinion and examples 92
- Nowadays many families move overseas for job opportunities Some people think this is beneficial for children of these families while others think children will find it difficult Discuss both views and give your own opinion 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...areness-raising campaigns to remind the general public about the importance and value of teach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49845201238 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13775524227 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59133126935 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9369324773 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6818181818 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203299821452 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053440947451 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438268607659 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127838686204 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050275763728 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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