Some people say that the best ways to improve public health is by increasing number of sport facilities. Others would say that this would have little effect and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In conditions of our fast-paced living there is a severe paucity of time for body weighted management, proper nutrition and walks on fresh air. These factors inevitably lead to the appearance of plethora of health disorders. Nowadays, the trend of healthy lifestyle has increased in popularity, and opinions vary with regard to the question: if the sport complexes are a paramount solution in recovery of public health. The diverse ideas will be discussed in this essay before I will conduct my attitude to this issue.
On the one hand, certainly, regular sport exercises are extremely beneficial for building our muscles and strengthen our body structure. It is scientifically proven, that sport activity prolongs our life duration, improves immune system and makes us less vulnerable to highly spread diseases. So, making sport centers more available for paying a visit to and encouraging people to join various sport clubs will increase level of public health definitely. Due to the current trend of sporty life styles, on the Internet you could subscribe the diversity of sport programs and heath marathons, that provide you precious opportunity to exercise comfortably from home.
On the other hand, overwhelming number of sport facilities actually do not eliminate the public health problem subsequently. People are strongly overloaded with work schemes from 9 to 6 daily and house chores in consequence. Moreover, the sport exercises should be done on regular basis, what requires the high level of personal motivation to do this. Thus, increasing number of sport facilities will be beneficial only for insignificant part of population. In this case, transformation of medical insurance system and relocation of state budget funds into building new hospitals could be more practical method for improving public health levels. The current situation in modern hospitals due to the pandemic conditions is terribly managed and leaves much to be desired. The significant part of population are unable to get paid medical service and have to try surviving with low quality free medical cure. So, the modernization of medical sphere would provide more opportunities to maintenance health lever for majority of population.
Looking throughout the whole issue, I want to conclude that the influence of each health improving method alone will be rather minor, rather than complex program implementation including sport, medical and other environmental facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46719160105 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93693633383 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.332310141 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.529411765 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208204291481 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640761666596 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497604391429 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117253191756 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363424511719 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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