Sometimes we have to reside in a country that require us to speak nonnative language. Some people argue that this may create significant social and practical problems. I completely agree with the statement and will explain the reasons.
Having to talk in foreign language can cause serious social problem because language serves as a communication bridge between people. All people use language when they want to say something. Thus if someone does not understand the language that people mainly speak, he or she will most likely be isolated from any social group. This can happen everywhere, including neighborhood and working places. For instance, a guy from United States just migrated to Japan where most people speak Japanese. Because he does not master Japanese, he finds difficulty in socializing with his neighbors in Japan.
Moreover, having to speak in nonnative language may also create significant practical problem because language can not be separated from people's daily activities. Almost every activity involves using language. This can be purchasing public transportation ticket, ordering food menu to understanding public announcement. Consequently, if someone does not master the language, his everyday activities will be hampered. For example, a women from United Kingdom just moved to Taiwan, where Mandarin Chinese become the language that is mainly used. Almost all of public transportation guide and food menu are written in Mandarin Chinese. Because she does not master Mandarin Chinese language, she then finds obstacles in doing her daily activities.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the statement that having to live in a country which require us to speak nonnative language may cause significant social and practical problems because language serves as a communication bridge between people and language can not be separated from people's daily activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nguage when they want to say something. Thus if someone does not understand the lang...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...tivities will be hampered. For example, a women from United Kingdom just moved to Taiwa...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...vities will be hampered. For example, a women from United Kingdom just moved to Taiwa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55517241379 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8553910461 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503448275862 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.360827266 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7647058824 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289515852856 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894926204825 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909569463267 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207829410884 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685670594054 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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