The line graph compares the figures of foreign travellers to three places in Europe over the period of 20 years from 1987 to 2007.
Overall, the number of international visitors to these areas were all increased, although there were a few fluctuations in the figures. Also, the sea and the lake the mountain were two more favourite areas than ever.
In 1987, there were 40,000 visitors coming to the coast, 20,000 people travelling to Series 3 and 10,000 people visiting the lake the mountain. In the year 2002, the numbers of oversea visitors to the sea, series 3 and the lake the mountain were 62,000, 25,000 and 75,000 people respectively. In the 1987-2002 period, there were the upward trends in the numbers of travellers to the coast and the lake the mountain, but the figure for the lake the mountain rose more significantly than that in the coast and was overweight that figure to reach a peak of 75,000 visitors in 2002. The number of travelling to series 3 was move up and down at around 20,000 and 30,000.
in 2007, 66,000 visitors came to the lake the mountain, 55,000 visitors liked to travel at the coast and 35,000 visitors loved series 3. the remainder of the period witnessed the downward trends in the numbers of visitors to the lake the mountain and the coast, while the figure for Series 3 saw an slight increase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... 25,000 and 75,000 people respectively. In the 1987-2002 period, there were the up...
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Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f 75,000 visitors in 2002. The number of travelling to series 3 was move up and d...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... and down at around 20,000 and 30,000. in 2007, 66,000 visitors came to the lake ...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ast and 35,000 visitors loved series 3. the remainder of the period witnessed the d...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...oast, while the figure for Series 3 saw an slight increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69361702128 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45535971057 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451063829787 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4356948599 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.555555556 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156871439828 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824341980517 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363990166882 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116377836502 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249350043125 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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