The bar chart below shows the minutes per day spent by different age groups in the United Kingdom on three media.
The given graph indicates the average time (in minutes) consumed daily in Great Britain on three selected categories, namely television, computer and radio in two consecutive years (2009-2010).
It is obvious that except for those among 16-24, other age groups spent the majority of their time on television; additionally, as people get older, they tended to stick to television and radio rather than computer.
Concerning television and radio, the time consumed on these two means of communication underwent an upward trend in consistency with the age of users. For example, the daily time range spent on TV marginally increased for people aged 16-54, followed by an intense upsurge to approximately 4 hours for 55 plus. In terms of radio users, there was a rise of 30 minutes on media facilitators between each age group (16-24, 25-44 and 45-54), and after people reached 55, the amount of time spent on this figure experienced a noticeable decline to 1 hours as similar to that of the 25-44 group.
Computer usage showed the opposite trend as compared to the abovementioned categories. The most popular PC consumption was to be found in young generation with the recorded statistics of 3.30 hours per day. From 25 to over 55, people showed less preference in computer utilization with a rather steady decrease over the given period until nosediving to only 1 hour on a daily basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hose among 16-24, other age groups spent the majority of their time on television...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
as to, except for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01739130435 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8175925854 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617391304348 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6910356 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.25 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158455497023 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636086908432 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331258697296 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847977504146 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238197826643 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.