Many people think that the most important things in life are free ( cannot be bought). Do you agree or disagree.?
These days even advice is not free. However, some people believe that the most valuable things are easy to get, without even paying for them. I strongly disagree with this viewpoint and will substantiate my view in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the predominant reason for my belief is that nowadays everything comes with a price tag. In other words, one has to earn money to satisfy the basic needs in order to support adequate accommodation and better education facilities. Otherwise, the consequences are quite detrimental for the better living. In illustration, those people who are earning an exorbitant amount of money are able to fulfil their needs and requirements, if compared to those who only dream to get things for free. Thus, each and every item has its price in this materialistic world.
Moving ahead, another compelling reason is that in this cut- throat competition mostly every second person is doing hard work to achieve more precious things for themselves. This is because of the rise in the inflation rate, everything is very expensive. So, a person is doing a job or setting a business to secure a good life in the near future .If anything which is free, then it is sympathy which is generally shown by people with higher status as they are trying to mock those who avoid doing hard work for their comfort.
In conclusion, I opined by saying that in this consumer driven society nothing is available for free, one has to earn money and then aim to buy their dream product. So, one ought to make goals in their life and try to achieve them to satisfy their needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, then, thus, as to, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82310469314 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57928027337 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4169927897 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139747578762 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441796352114 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433615877025 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878611034421 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444100147424 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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