The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance . why do people operations to change the way they look . Do you think it is a positive or negative development.
Undoubtedly, physical appearance is a major concern in all the nations in the world.As people are operate to change the way they look. Number of masses interested in cosmetic surgery is rising in order to make their physical appearance better.It has both negative and positive growth which i will discuss in my upcoming paraphrases
Interesting in cosmetic surgery,number of individuals are increasing in order to improve their looks.Masses do this to look attractive. In this modern era, population judge each other only by their looks,what type of clothes they are wearing,their color and more,that is why masses do operations.This will not only make them look attractive, but also effect their health.Individuals think they look less attractive as compared to others
However, another major reason behind this is number of people suffering from accidents,which has damaged their faces and other body parts,masses make their interest in cosmetic surgery to improve looks . For example, Michael Jackson very famous dancer has done more than 53 surgeries on his face and was the most beautiful person at that time but he also died due to the infection by surgeries.As excess of anything is bad.
In conclusion,although it is very useful for masses who suffers through accidents and their body parts are damaged, it will also effect the health and risk of death is at peak.I think it is a positive growth for the masses interested in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98765432099 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75860644485 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576131687243 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5960882948 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397176452998 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146942441022 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11866778071 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225289315134 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122536379107 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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