It is true that music can inspire our soul and purify our mind. Some people believed that music has a significant element to bring different nations together and exchange their diversity history.
Every country had different stories of music from their ancestors. Some music lyrics tend to greet their history or celebrities, so that the residents can easily remember and leave it over. The cultural background and the spirit of a nation can be discovered from their music. Such as a national anthem, the lyrics of it always contain their stories and it brings all the residents to sing it louder and prouder in all ages. In Taiwan, we have to learn the meaning of our anthem and how it has been creative, so every Taiwanese can understand our national value and direction. Therefore, music can stimulate and cooperate in all ages.
Before the language age, music was used to communicate in the past. Our ancestors used different sounds to recognize others' actions when they hunt the food in the jungles. The long and short speech whistle can spread to a hundred mile distance, so the other side of village people can receive the message from others. After several years, the invention of musical instruments has brought a lost change to the music. Humans start to play the melodies and write the lyrics so that they become a song that audiences can sing and listen. Therefore, it is believed that we used to be communicated with others by music, so it undeniable that music surely can bring all the nations together.
In conclusion, music has magical element to stimulate our mind, it is because that was how we used to communicate in the past. Therefore, people love to listen music whatever their ages.
- These days Internet based courses have become a popular alternative to university based courses Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures Others argue that it is important to study at university Discuss both th 87
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 67
- Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to How true is this statement What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments 73
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 56
- Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it This they argue leads to a more satisfying working life To what extent do you agree with this view What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85324232082 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51186655908 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501706484642 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1228822603 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162493856992 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651781075879 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05790685094 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122364563237 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458451218132 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.