A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions on how to take care of your pet
describe the other household duties
Hello James,
I am writing this letter to apprise you about some intrinsic information so that looking after my place and dog would not be arduous for you.
Since I would be in a different country, I would have a different phone number, and there could be instances when you would want to connect with me. Therefore, you can call me on 9999955555. Additionally, my phone might not be reachable when I would be in the countryside of the nation; thus, please drop an e-mail to my official email address martin.121@gmail.com.
Furthermore, please look after my dog painstakingly because it is an old animal. You would need to feed it the conferred food thrice a day. Moreover, take the pet on a morning and evening walk everyday because the stroll would help my dog to dwell actively throughout the day.
When it comes to taking care of the house, there are not various chores to do. You would need to give the garbage to the housekeeper every morning, and make sure that taps are off as they need repairement.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Truly,
Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e the pet on a morning and evening walk everyday because the stroll would help my dog to...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74210526316 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82786392962 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626315789474 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3186448163 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9090909091 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18384540697 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764664251881 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493408105205 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970272816634 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398313038359 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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