Many people opine that young kids can learn a lot from television, and therefore parents and teachers should encourage them in doing so. I totally disagree with this statement, even though many TV shows offer good information related to science and history. The majority of content on all channels nowadays focuses more towards advertisements and other harmful materials.
People who favor television as a good learning option, says so as there are many educational channels like Discovery, Nat Geography and History Channel. All these programs offers good source of audio-visual information to the viewers. Also, studies have shown that children are able to learn things quickly when provided with visual learning methods. However, television is not the perfect source for kids, when intended to gain knowledge.
Nowadays, most of the TV channels focuses more on advertising to increase their commercial aspects. So, these ads act as a major disturbance, as the child looses focus from the important information provided on the show to such marketing strategies. So, it is not wise to say that television can offer learning opportunities to a great extent.
On the other hand, there are many other sources from where a child can learn. Nowadays, books with images are available, that helps to develop critical thinking ability in a child. Also, educational videos are available online, that can provide an enjoyable learning experience to these young generation.
In conclusion, television do provide some good information form few channels, However other sources like educational videos and pictorial books helps them to improve their conitive skills and critical thinking abilities.
- Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed What is the reason for doing this Is this a negative or positive development 73
- In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these TV shows and books are popular What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas 73
- In the past older generation was source of knowledge and experience What in modern world they have little knowledge and youngster have idea more than older one Is it positive or negative development 53
- Your have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course You naive find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what actio 61
- Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers Discuss both the views and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48091603053 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81341985391 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9381554954 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168936269343 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597392467787 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512994340599 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943394624594 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404345375811 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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