Why, according to Winnie, has her life been filled with such bad luck?
Winnie Louie is the main character in the story The Kitchen God’s Wife, a character who plays an important role, and strongly impresses her readers about her life. Why has Winnie's life been filled with such bad luck?
Winnie was born into a rich family by a beautiful mother, and the bad thing that happened to her mother decided to leave her, even the person she called her father ignored her. Without a choice she is forced to live with distant relatives. Winnie realizes the unhappiness of her life when she was abandoned by her family. From the same start, she married Wen Fu, a bad man. What Winnie received in a loveless marriage was insults, but he’s sick actions satisfied his needs. The climax of this marriage was the death of her children, the great loss no one could understand. Wei Fu is the cause of everything, it is because of him, he is always right, he brought himself a great crime. Wei Fu is the most deserving character, if he had a gun he should shoot himself in the head to apologize for the evil he had done. Winnie is a pitiful figure in this marriage, she weakly accepts every mistake about her and suffers from that deadly husband.
Winnie's life changed when he met Jimmy Louie. They love each other at first sight, Jimmy's love is sincere. Jimmy Louie is a good man, husband, father - the character's appearance as a light in Winnie's hurt soul. “ I imagined him looking for me, running through the park, looking in the movie theatres. He was a good man considerate and kind, but he was not strong. He had never been through any kind of bad hardship before. So I worried” When she went to prison she didn't worry about herself, she worried Jimmy couldn't find her, it hurt like they were only worried about each other. Although separated, their love is more sincere than ever. “ Chance is the first step you take” Finally she was to come to America and marry Jimmy to start a new life. Winnie deserves a happy life, finding the right man of her life, a good man, a good father for her children.
Winnie's life was unlucky when she was born, but she didn't give up. This strong personality has touched the hearts of readers, the mature Winnie always moves forward, ignoring the painful past. She has personally changed her fate to seize the opportunity and seek a good life for herself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, so, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5584725537 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27246158002 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563245823389 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1101962628 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5833333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4583333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04166666667 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298836628731 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995498495585 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164866039031 0.0667982634062 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232345791304 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155974403161 0.056905535591 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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