Some people consider computer to be more of a hindrance than a help Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential How could comouters be considered a hindrance

computer is being important device
computer is being an important device

Sentence: Firstly, in social and psycologist impact, computer will make people addiction.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and addiction

Sentence: We will feel cannot live without computer.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to feel and cannot

there are 60% worker who are doing their job with computer will choose to take a rest use their compur
60% workers who are doing their job with computer will choose to take a rest after they use their computer

They think use this application will make their picture is more beautiful
They think using this application will make their picture more beautiful

Sentence: For example: a number of children in International school choose to make a picture with photoshop or similar application than drawing themselves.
Description: The fragment school choose to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace choose with verb, past tense

Sentence: They did not feel difficult complete it.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to difficult and complete

Sentence: People who have used computer for along time, would be inferred the wave radiation to decrease eye health.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to for and along

Sentence: Some people believe computer give more hindrance than benefit to decrease the human potential.
Description: The fragment computer give more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular

Sentence: Firstly, in social and psycologist impact, computer will make people addiction.
Error: psycologist Suggestion: psychologist

Sentence: Computer's features have an actractive influence for our stimulus response.
Error: actractive Suggestion: attractive

Sentence: For example, in Jakarta there are 60 worker who are doing their job with computer will choose to take a rest use their compur such as, playing games, browsing in social media, or watching movies.
Error: compur Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: Secondly, computer could be considered a hindrance for human pontential in education.
Error: pontential Suggestion: potential

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2

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Definitions of hindrance
noun
a thing that provides resistance, delay, or obstruction to something or someone.
"a hindrance to the development process"
synonyms: impediment, obstacle, barrier, bar, obstruction, handicap, block, hurdle, restraint, restriction, limitation, encumbrance, interference, complication, delay, drawback, setback, difficulty, inconvenience, snag, catch, hitch, check, stumbling block, fly in the ointment, hiccup, wrench in the works

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 322 350
No. of Characters: 1718 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.236 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.335 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.69 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.164 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.542 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.489 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5