Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible Other however children should be allowed to stay at home and play untill they are six or seven years old Which view point do you agree with and why

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...years and instead of learning in schools , they should play at home . On the flip ...
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...dvantages of joining school ar early age . First and foremost , attending schools ...
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...opment of cognitive abilities of learner . The extra curriculum activities such as...
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...ities such as dancing , singing , acting , painting and so on directly affects the...
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...mstances or activities . Needless to say , the idea of joining classes at early ag...
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... classes at early age should be welcomed . Further emphasizing on the positive ...
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...ng on the positive side . To embark with , joining classes at younger age makes th...
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...ge makes them the learner of good ethics . To demonstrate , in this modern era , m...
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...le to spend precious time with juveniles . Therefore , they cannot teach them soci...
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...ocial , moral as well as cultural ethics . Attending classes at schools make them ...
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...chools make them well mannered character . Consequently , young individuals will b...
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...m well mannered character . Consequently , young individuals will become noble cha...
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...iety by attending early learning classes . To recapitulate , undeniably early lea...
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...arly learning classes . To recapitulate , undeniably early learning process has s...
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...early learning process has some demerits . However , i still believe that it has m...
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...ning process has some demerits . However , i still believe that it has more merits...
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...ve that it has more merits than demerits . At last , early learning should be prom...
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... has more merits than demerits . At last , early learning should be promoted
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29577464789 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86585502076 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1697747962 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243432029266 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686266804962 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675094055809 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15126444122 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104616895818 0.056905535591 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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