To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A leader should have many qualities to successfully guide his followers. He should be in a justifiable position to guide his followers. Leader should possess high ethical and moral standards to act as role model for others. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the prompt because of two reasons.
If a person does follow a standard or believe in a principle, he cannot ask others to follow or believe in that principle. So, if a person wants to become a successful leader, he should possess some good qualities that others can follow. Also having such a quality helps to attract more people having similar qualities. For instance, if a leader is not corrupt by nature, he will lead his followers in the path against corruption and he will attract more followers who are against corruption as well. So, it is essential for a leader to have some good qualities which can be used for a good cause. In contrast, if, the leader himself is corrupt, he will not be aware of the good things he can achieve without being corrupt and his followers will also indulge in corruption and thus leading to a decadent society.
A good start will always lead to good results. If a leader starts his carrier with high standards, he will always go beyond the existing standard, and it is least likely that he will go below the current standards. If, the habit of keeping high standards continues throughout the life, it much likely that, the leader will end up with good result because of his unchanging principles. For example, if an entrepreneur’s motto is customer satisfaction regardless of the his new company’s financial conditions, his loyal customer base will increase and the company is likely to flourish. If, entrepreneur had compromised his goal when the company had financial crisis, he would have lost many customers. This example clearly illustrates the importance of having ethical and moral standards.
However, some people may argue that, even money and power can make a leader successful. But, the success, that is earned by money and power and without any inherent qualities of leader, will not last longer and he/she is going to lose the charm of the role model in his adherents’ eyes soon. Thus, it can be concluded that, to be an effective leader it is essential to have highest moral and ethical standards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... good qualities that others can follow. Also having such a quality helps to attract ...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
... is customer satisfaction regardless of the his new company’s financial conditions, his...
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Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
... an effective leader it is essential to have highest moral and ethical standards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86397984887 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71591662899 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476070528967 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3979099999 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.631578947 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133600572545 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052881111509 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590267360991 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998425443226 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363696946054 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.