Currently, mobile phones are playing a vital role in in information sharing and bringing people closer. Despite its negative effects, it has some inevitable roles that cannot be overlooked. However, some argue that the use of cell phones should be banned in public places such as: libraries, shops and public transport. In my opinion, mobile phones can be used in public places, but with some restrictions.
Cell phone has contributed a lot in many ways. The most significant aspect is that it is very convenient due to its portability. Nowadays there various shapes and sizes available, that is w...
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