the graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
summarize the information by selecting and selecting and reporting the main and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the global usage of water by different sectors in twentieth century while the below table indicates the usage of water in a year 2000 in Brazil versus Democratic Republic of Congo.
The figure shows that during the 50-year period from 1900 to 1950, approximately there is no consumption of water in industrial and domestic parts. Simultaneously, the agricultural water usage in 1900 was about 500 km3 and it has risen modestly till 1950 up to 1000 km3. From 1950 to 2000 there are two dramatic increases for agriculture and industry. In contrast, the domestic sector has ...
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No. of Words: 324 200
Write the essay in 20 minutes. You may remove the conclusion paragraph.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 324 200
No. of Characters: 1485 1000
No. of Different Words: 142 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.243 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.583 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.55 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.469 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.413 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.627 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4