Three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular uk school in 1981,1991,2001
The pie chart describes the changes in an school.the changes were made in an annual spending by a particular uk school.these changes were occurred in the last few years .the changes had occurred i the years are 1981,1991 and the last but not least 2001.
The school were spending some types of resources are insurance,teachers salaries,and furniture and equipment ,and as well as resources,and workers salaries.the uk school were spending in the year 1981 on insurance is 2%,and the teachers salaries were spending up to 40%,and there fore they want an updated furniture equipment with 15%,and as well as resources of 15% ,and the remaining 28%had given to the workers salaries.
But in the year 1991 the insurance had climbing up to 3% and teachers salaries had also increased up to 50%,but in the year 1991 the furniture equipment had went down to 5%,and resources had increased as 20%,and other workers salaries were had given to 22%.
And the changes remaining in the year 2001 had an remarkable changes had occurred mostly insurance had climbing up to 8% i that year the teachers salaries were went down on 45%,furniture equipment had rose to 23%.
By observing the graph we can concluded that the maximum changes had occurred in the year 1991 and the minimum changes had also occurred in the year 2001.
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in an school.
in a school.
The school were spending some types of resources are insurance,teachers salaries,
The school were spending some types of resources which are insurance,teachers salaries,
he uk school were spending in the year 1981 on insurance is 2%,
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the furniture equipment had went down
the furniture equipment had been down
And the changes remaining in the year 2001 had an remarkable changes had occurred mostly insurance had climbing up to 8%
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