For hundreds of years, people have never stopped debating about the most enjoyable way of doing job. Finding a method with which we enjoy our jobs is a very crucial and critical task of our life since it has a profound impact on our societies. Regarding this issue, some people believe that working just a few days of the week for long hours and rest the other days can cheer them up. Without question there are positive and negative aspect of that. It seems plausible at first glimpse that it is a good method of working. Nonetheless, this proposal could not achieve what it promises. I will enlarge on what I mean in this essay.
Above all, working for long hours during the day can make us so tired that we cannot stand other things. It can result in bad behavior with our families or our friends. As we know, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. I must say that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. I worked with a company only four days a week from dawn till dusk. When I returned home, I was absolutely furious, so my younger brother could not play with me, even they could not talk to me. Hence, that work was not enjoyable for me.
The other reason which deserves some words here is the fact that having nothing to do on other days of the week can make us crazy and as old proverb says: "having nothing to do will lead to bad thought which will be able to end up with bad happening." My cousin is a living example of that. For a short period of his life, he had nothing to do three days a week. Those free time lets him use some drugs which were really detrimental. So, having a long free time cannot always be enjoyable.
Another subtle point that I should deem is that due to a research which was conducted by Sharif University in that field, working too hard during the day can decrease the performance of worker even if they do not work for several days of the week, especially in the last hours of work. According to the reporter, workers often complained about those hours and it was disgusting for them. Therefore, working for a long time of the day is really boring, even if we have a long vacation.
Based on the argument has mentioned above, I firmly draw the conclusion that working five days a week for shorter hours are more enjoyable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, nonetheless, really, regarding, so, therefore, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38139534884 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34937134152 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539534883721 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.71897397 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6363636364 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381920225768 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107118511109 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105640595655 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237224968237 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777281654134 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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