In the era of advancement and technology use of computers growing rocketry. Additionally, now also it is possible to play games with high resolution graphics and realistic experience. It is suitable for all age’s group and available all over the globe, its open source. It is generally claimed that by parents that computer games has more negative impact compared to their positive impact. In my point of view, it is good argument that it has negative value, its positive values are far away their drawbacks.
To commence with, in the era of education everyone able to use computers and most of the work done by the computers. Computers has numerous number of benefits compared to their drawbacks. In the pandemic time its value more increase compared to past. Every people tend to follow computers and when we talk about games it is also intensely created by manufacturer like some time gamming purpose, some education purpose and many more. For instance, there is game created ‘mine craft’. Which is totally based on logical expressions. It has several level and for next level people have to solve some simple quiz type questions which help to build logical knowledge among the people.
Furthermore, not a major concern but it is also source of earn money by playing games. Nowadays, there are many platform in which people can streaming their game and earn money depends on their technique they use and trick they follow to surpass the level. A good illustration of this, all over globe renowned game PUBG which is played by all over the world population in their devices and there are many people are there who stream their game play and earn lot of money and now their life style changed compared to past. So, here is the not least but considerable point to play games.
On the other hand, some people are mad on this games and ten to seat in front of computers hours and hours and spend their time on it. This cause’s eye problem, UV rays which emanate from the computer screen and directly pass through the eyes may causes eye problem in future. Also, some people forgot to exercise at that lead to obsess. For example, people are totally crazy about game even though they forgot about study at that time and also distract from the study and tend to seat in front of computers which lead obesity.
In conclusion, it has few numbers of drawbacks, its advantages are more compared to drawbacks. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the statement that computer games has less value in education and huge number of negative impacts. It is suggested that, use of computer in a better way make bright future for nation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...s value more increase compared to past. Every people tend to follow computers and whe...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ce, there is game created ‘mine craft’. Which is totally based on logical expressions...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun level seems to be countable; consider using: 'several levels'.
Suggestion: several levels
...ly based on logical expressions. It has several level and for next level people have to solve...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sourced'.
Suggestion: sourced
...ore, not a major concern but it is also source of earn money by playing games. Nowaday...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'platforms'?
Suggestion: platforms
...playing games. Nowadays, there are many platform in which people can streaming their gam...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the other hand, some people are mad on this games and ten to seat in front of compu...
^^^^
Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...through the eyes may causes eye problem in future. Also, some people forgot to exercise a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79824561404 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42990372916 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484649122807 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7025080472 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1304347826 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8260869565 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184750225854 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552303412168 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477205195008 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114498134779 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396675348602 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...s value more increase compared to past. Every people tend to follow computers and whe...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ce, there is game created ‘mine craft’. Which is totally based on logical expressions...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun level seems to be countable; consider using: 'several levels'.
Suggestion: several levels
...ly based on logical expressions. It has several level and for next level people have to solve...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sourced'.
Suggestion: sourced
...ore, not a major concern but it is also source of earn money by playing games. Nowaday...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'platforms'?
Suggestion: platforms
...playing games. Nowadays, there are many platform in which people can streaming their gam...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the other hand, some people are mad on this games and ten to seat in front of compu...
^^^^
Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...through the eyes may causes eye problem in future. Also, some people forgot to exercise a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79824561404 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42990372916 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484649122807 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7025080472 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1304347826 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8260869565 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184750225854 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552303412168 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477205195008 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114498134779 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396675348602 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.