Earlier students did their higher education in their country, but nowadays due to globolisation students have a lot of opportunities to go to foreign countries for higher education. I woul like to disscuss both pros and cons of this develooment in this essay.
On the one hand, one of the main advantages of studying abroad is that it helps to enhance person's worldview and perspectives interact different kind of people. Another main thing, there is atmoshere, in which you can learn about new cultures and languages. Resent studies shows that, person, studies abroad ,is more adoptive and knowledgeble. Additionally, the quality of education in best universities of foreign countries, gives better career opportunitiesand provides to grow wages.
On the other hand, even, more benefits of studying abroad explained above, it has its own cons. Students who tend to study abroad, try to make their home ofthis foreign country. Moreover, after graduating university they do not want to come back their country they prefer to live there, they choose sophisticated life. Therefore, they fail to contribute to develop their motherland. To examplify, students in some country such as India, go to abroad for studying, however, after graduating their education they do not want to return their country. As a result, developing or under developed country lose its valuable human resours.
Inconclusion, even there are enough drawbacks of studying abroad, I absolutely believe, it brings people many chances, in terms of academic abilities, during their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39754098361 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93186936412 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651639344262 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1542882381 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.307692308 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435797991083 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12967278786 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680064528558 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20535047838 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101550712017 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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