1. The first graph below shows the weight (in tonnes) of fruit produced by a farm during each month in 2013, and also the amount (in tonnes) of fertiliser used. The second graph shows the volume of rainfall in each month (in millimetres.) Write a report summarising the information.
The charts provide information regarding the tonnage of fruits produced in a farm, along with the fertilizer used and monthly rainfall during the year 2013. Rainfall is measured in millimeters (mm) while weight of fruits and amount of fertilizers both is tones.
Overall, the weight of fruits increases with the decrease in rainfall and also with the lowest amount of fertilizer used in the farm.
On the one hand, the weight of fruit was about 2.1 tonnes during January when the amount of fertilizer used was 0.5 tonnes. After, fruit weight increases sharply so as the fertilizer till March where the amount of fruit was found to be around 2.8 tonnes and amount of fertilizer used was nearly 1 tonnes. Moreover, the amount of fruit peaked during July at about 4.2 tonnes where amount of fertilizer deepened and reached at 0 tonnes. Furthermore, weight of fruit plummeted and reached the initial weight of 2.1 tonnes however, the amount of fertilizer increases slowly at approximately 0.5 tonnes at the final month.
On the other hand, weight of fruit from around 2.1 tonnes increased sharply to 4.2 tonnes where rainfall recorded of 12 mm to 4 mm had been observed respectively during January and July. From July to September the amount of rainfall was found to be stable in contrast to this, the weight of fruit during the same month found to be highly reduced. In the following month, the amount of rainfall increases to 14 mm while the weight of fruits sharply declined to 2.1 tonnes during December.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, while, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87548638132 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51774726897 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4046692607 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8141753556 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.3 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302412076767 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16241061579 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396460161495 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211175029603 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025951297771 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, while, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87548638132 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51774726897 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4046692607 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8141753556 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.3 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302412076767 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16241061579 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396460161495 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211175029603 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025951297771 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.