the chart below shows information about the workers from foreign country who learn the local languages.
The bar graph highlights a breakdown the information in term of how many percentage of workers who learn native language. It is measured in percentage and there are divided in five countries.Overall, what stands out from the graph examines that there are different learning local languages faced by overseas workers who work in different country groups.
A more detailed look at the graph reveals that international workers in Germany who learn to speak German is recorded as by far the greatest proportions, with figure representing approximately 75%. Belgium, by contrast, has this as the second biggest figures which is nearly 70% lower than that of international workers in Germany.
A striking point is that there are three immigrant workers who learn to speak English in this group.The workers from other countries are learning English languages, at merely about 10% in Australia and above 12% in the United States. Learning English language is the highest overseas workers for people who work in United Kingdom, at almost 20%.
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Workers from foreign
Workers from foreign countries who learn to speak English in United Kingdom is the highest figures at almost 20%, compared both overseas workers in US and Australia.
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Workers ... is the highest figures ?
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The bar graph highlights a breakdown the information
The bar graph highlights a breakdown of information
as the second biggest figures which is nearly 70%
as the second biggest figure which is nearly 70%
Learning English language is the highest overseas workers for people who work in United Kingdom, at almost 20%.
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