In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is the case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?
It is undeniable fact that juvenile delinquency has been increased significantly all over the world. This essay presents several reasons for this trend as well as discusses some punishment that should be imposed to address the problem.
To begin with, the evolution of delinquency committed by teenagers comes from various reasons. One of the most obvious cause is the lack of care and upbringing from parents. As many parents are busy with their work schedules, they do not have enough time for their children. Without parental control, teenagers who have low awareness are likely to be affected by bad influences. This is why many of them are leading to more criminal activities such as shoplifting and drugs abuse. Another cause for this dilemma is the social media. Modern technology allow adolescents to get access to the varieties of websites on various topics, many of which may contain violent videos. Hence, the inappropriate contents may cause youngsters to commit more improper stuffs.
However, there are several actions as a punishments that should be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, parents should pay proper attention to the activities of their off-springs. They should spend time to teach them about the difference between right and wrong. Moreover, in schools, students should be taught about ethical values such as non-violence and compassion. Parents, teachers and counsellors should help children to tackle the pressures of life they are immerse with and help them to come out of depression and stress.
To sum up, the lack of guidance from the families and exposures of violence are responsible for the increase in the number of juveniles crime. However, diverse measures can be enforced to tackle the problems that are certain to arise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...e evolution of delinquency committed by teenagers comes from various reasons. One of the ...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a punishment' or simply 'punishments'?
Suggestion: a punishment; punishments
... However, there are several actions as a punishments that should be taken to solve the probl...
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Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'immersed'.
Suggestion: immersed
...o tackle the pressures of life they are immerse with and help them to come out of depre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22105263158 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71827711444 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3194377366 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5294117647 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242554063237 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614496646491 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382011543468 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114981826068 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516362147699 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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