On the other hand, working hard to overpower such conditions can help to advance in professional career as well as to lead a successful life. In fact, there are many examples throughout history about people who became successful by conquering difficult circumstances. Take an example, Christiano Ronaldo was born to a financially backward family and had no money receive training for football or join a club. However, he took many parttime jobs later on his teenage years and worked hard. Finally, as a result of his constant struggle he was selected to the Portugal national football team.
On the other hand, working hard to overpower such conditions can help to advance in professional career as well as to lead a successful life. In fact, there are many examples throughout history about people who became successful by conquering difficult circumstances. Take an example, Christiano Ronaldo was born to a financially backward family and had no money receive training for football or join a club. However, he took many parttime jobs later on his teenage years and worked hard. Finally, as a result of his constant struggle he was selected to the Portugal national football team.
On the other hand, working hard to overpower such conditions can help to advance in professional career as well as to lead a successful life. In fact, there are many examples throughout history about people who became successful by conquering difficult circumstances. Take an example, Christiano Ronaldo was born to a financially backward family and had no money receive training for football or join a club. However, he took many parttime jobs later on his teenage years and worked hard. Finally, as a result of his constant struggle he was selected to the Portugal national football team.
On the other hand, working hard to overpower such conditions can help to advance in professional career as well as to lead a successful life. In fact, there are many examples throughout history about people who became successful by conquering difficult circumstances. Take an example, Christiano Ronaldo was born to a financially backward family and had no money receive training for football or join a club. However, he took many parttime jobs later on his teenage years and worked hard. Finally, as a result of his constant struggle he was selected to the Portugal national football team.
- Every individual has different acceptance levels about their current situations Some people are of th opinion that it is better to accept difficult circumstances while others advocate attempts to work hard and overcome such situations In the scope of this 56
- Every individual has different acceptance levels about their current situations Some people are of th opinion that it is better to accept difficult circumstances while others advocate attempts to work hard and overcome such situations In the scope of this
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, well, as to, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11340206186 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87571586507 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.201030927835 0.561755894193 36% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9532878745 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944174376986 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468937491778 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040756594225 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944174376986 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.76 8.58950901804 67% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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