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A special gift I received
Every year, I always receive a lot of different gifts from my parents, brothers and friends on my birthday. But on my 21th birthday, I received a special gift from my best friend. She gave me a small red box and said that: “This is my special gift for you. I hope you will love it”. I opened it. It was a thick book.
I could have been never envisage that my best friend would give me such a precious gift. The book with title was “Life Without Limits” by an extraordinary man, Nick Vujicic. The book was not only Nick’s story but also plenty of stories of other people that Nick encount...
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I could have been never envisage that
I could have been never envisaged that
to live an independent and fulfilling life
to live in an independent and fulfilling life
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Avg. Sentence Length: 13.217 21.0
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
better to have 4-5 paragraphs:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion
or:
para 1: introduction
para 2: idea one.
para 3: however, idea two
para 4: in my opinion...
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 304 350
No. of Characters: 1242 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.176 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.086 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.184 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 65 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.217 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.242 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.261 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.441 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.185 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5