Some people enjoy spending their free time alone in activities such as reading, thinking, or writing. Others enjoy spending their free time in shared activities with other people. Which do you prefer and why?
people have different opinions in terms of spending their break times. Some people prefer to do some activities alone, others, however, prefer to do them with friends. If I were asked about my opinion, I would say that I agree with the latter because spending free time with others has a positive effect on people’s finances and enjoyment.
To begin with, spending time with friends helps people use their money effectively. When people spend their free time with others, they will save money due to the fact that most activities have offers for people in groups. For example, a person has spare time, and they prefer to spend it kayaking. If they are alone, the ticket would be $20. Nevertheless, if they are in a group, the ticket would be $30 for the whole group which, in turn, will cost less for each individual. Also, when they go dine together, they can reduce the cost by sharing the food without having to order the same dish twice. Therefore, spending free time with peers has a benefit in terms of entertainment’s affordability.
While spending free time with others has a positive impact on people’s finances, it can also make their time more enjoyable. Doing activities with friends who have the same interests provides people with a sense of pleasurable moments. This is because many activities are more exciting when doing them with others. For example, a person who has a talent in basketball. They would spend their free time with their peers playing for hours on end. They will have a fun time playing together. However, spending free time alone hinders them enjoying basketball since this activity needs a group in order to play. Consequently, they will be bored playing alone. Therefore, spending free time with others leads to having pleasurable time.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that it is better to spend free time with others because people will use money in a good way and enjoy themselves at the same time. Indeed, life is always better when it is shared.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52694732856 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463343108504 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1356928056 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0952380952 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2380952381 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493008341123 0.236089414692 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16547503001 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123289154924 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342933711102 0.150856017488 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762647621389 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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