The reading and the article are both contradict each other, in terms of putting high taxes on cigarettes and other unhealthy products. More specifically, the writer discusses that imposing high taxes on smoking products and unhealthy commodities would create numerous advantages. However, the lecturer casts doubt about the mentioned hypothesis in the reading and provides some evidence to refute them.
According to the article, the first dispute focuses on that imposing higher taxes on unhealthy food products and cigarettes demotivate people to consume those products. Nonetheless, the speaker refutes this argument and declares that high taxes would force people to buy low-quality cigarettes and unhealthy food which may cause severe health problems to them. Thus, this solution is not practical.
Moreover, another passage highlights that the idea of higher taxes is fair since unhealthy activities will cause more medical costs for society. Nevertheless, the narrator refutes this asserting that these taxes are unfair for people who are earning a low income. Furthermore, higher taxes would put much more burden on lower income people compared to rich people. Hence, this solution is not acceptable.
Finally, the text explains that the economic benefits of imposing high taxes could help the government to perform social projects such as building sports centers, public gardens, and many more. On the contrary, the penman opposes the theory and describes that higher taxes bring a vast amount of money to the government. Thereby, the government might become dependent on such income and indirectly encourage people to smoke in public areas and private area which will help the government to make more revenue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, thus, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53962264151 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59908245715 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7891247946 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06452816374 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450557751859 0.272083759551 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151806246969 0.0996497079465 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081888206039 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268969824708 0.162205337803 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387823513054 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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