The graph below shows the total revenue ò three pizza places in Vietnam. The figures were taken in 2017.
The graph compares the total revenue of different pizza companies during 2017 in Vietnam. In general, it can be seen from the graph that Pizza Hurt had lowest revenue over the year 2017, whereas the Pizza Company had highest total revenue throughout the year.
Starting at around 13 $US millions in Jan, the monthly revenue of Pizza Hurt was lowest among three pizza companies. This figure decreased gradually to about 6 $US millions in Feb. and Mar. and then increased slowly to reach approximate 13 $US millions in Jun. From Jun. to Dec., the monthly revenue continued to decline and get a lowest revenue in Dec. with below 5 $US millions.
In contrast, Domino pizza and the Pizza Company had revenue in Jan. higher much than Pizaa hurt, with around 33, 34 $US millions, respectively. But, revenue of both companies decreased dramatically to nearly 10 $US millions in Feb. After that, the revenue of these companies recovered increase from Feb to May, and then decreased slowly before growing up from Jun. to Aug. The Pizza company had highest revenue throughout the year, and reached a peak in Jul. with around 41 $US millions, before growing down steadily in remaining months of the year, and got about 35 $US millions in Dec. but still higher than other companies reported.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, still, then, whereas, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94761904762 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43577363424 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3207091495 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2142857143 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240462997977 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764596869508 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965493669636 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189726728819 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975114143038 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.