Global Water use by sector
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph and table demonstrates data about water usage and water consumption in two different countries namely, Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo.
To start with, the graph indicated report about global water use by sector such as agriculture, industrial and domestic use. In the chart the x axis showed the length of the area and y axis illustrated last 100 years. Industrial and domestic uses were stable first 40 years. However Agriculture use rose from 1900 to 2000 markedly. Last 60 years Industrial and Domestic use started to grow and were about approximately 1000 and 300 km, while agriculture jumped to 3000 km notably.
Secondly, the table demonstrated information about water consumption in Brazil and in Congo only in 2000. There were three main columns which showed details about population, irrigated land and water consumption per person. It is obviously clear that number of population in Brazil more than Congo. Accordingly, the irrigated land also more than Congo. Totally, it means water consumption per person equaled to 359m3 for Brazil, while for Congo it’s just equaled to 8m3.
To sum up, both of the data showed that the main sectors such as agriculture, industrial and domestic were developed in Brazil respectively than in Congo.
The graph and table demonstrates data about water usage and water consumption
The graph and table demonstrates the data about water usage and water consumption
Industrial and domestic uses were stable first 40 years
Industrial and domestic uses were stable in the first 40 years
Last 60 years Industrial and Domestic use started to grow
In the last 60 years Industrial and Domestic use started to grow
It is obviously clear that number of population in Brazil more than Congo
It is obviously clear that the number of population in Brazil is more than that in Congo
the irrigated land also more than Congo
the irrigated lands are also more than that in Congo
industrial and domestic were developed in Brazil respectively than in Congo.
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