For centuries, inhabitants of country comprehend that parents have a lot of effect on young generations' growth, however other people think that coming influence from outside plays an essential role of their cost of living. I will discuss about these in the following essay which authority have a great power.
First of all, it is clear that lots of parents think that they will give a big impression for children.
Children's growth belongs to their parents more.
For instance, if parents is well- educated person who is well known business also their children desire to become a businessman or woman.
Their characteristics should also impress their children.
Secondly, influence from the outside may impress only some situations. Because not all people we see are good either. Moreover, if we lead a thief person, as a consequence we may be imprisoned. But this circumstance do not always become. Other side of the corner, we see some people who donate a charity for poor or disabled. Then again, they construct a house for living homeless people. Similar good aspects of outside life can effect the child who sees it. I said that all above, there have a lot more advantages from taking impression parents.
Because youngsters may see bad people like burglar, killer or gypsy outside.
To sum up, I see all parents should create an atmosphere for children's influence which takes from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0775862069 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6423644287 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1378151249 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.625 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291423026345 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884272897552 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818813972667 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157754774236 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766512961595 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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