Some people believe that a vertical city in
which people work and live in tall buildings is
a good idea. Others say that horizontal living
is better. Discuss both views and express your
opinion
Modernity and advancement have revolutionized construction work in this contemporary world. Presently, some people assert that it is worthwhile to build skyscrapers for better work and living standard. However, others claim that horizontal buildings offer more conveniences to city dwellers. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold benefits of vertical city. First and foremost, nowadays, an enormous crowd is migrating to cities for business, jobs and education. As a result, people have to encounter problems related to space for business and ac...
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