In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food.It is therafore necessary for goverenments to impose a higher tax on this kinds of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, for example in Amerka and New Zenland go up number of people are suffering from they are eating too much fast food. Becouse these foods are low in calories and are haremful to human health. Therafore goverenments more in on a higher compitation this kinds of food. I agree this view.
First of all, majoritiy of people working and an other people studying variety organization. However they are can not fast eat so there is a problem with taxes. Nevertheless people buy fast food and eating. This suggestes that goverenments keep people health this kinds of food. What to do goverenments? Solve this problem there are majoritiy of ways on of them for this moderately food demand a highest charge levied by goverenments on property. Consecuently dropped dramatically their's number. If they are taxed so much, they will not benefit and will have to stop.That is why people need to pay more attention to themselve.
Secondly, people eating this sort of foods mus be played different sickness for example to smotch illness, diseases of the bowels and become slow. Therafore people themselves have to cooking food every day and going to the work-shop, schools and others. The goverenments sole purpose is to take care of the health of its critizens.
In conclusion, in my opinion people dont eate fast food becouse this is there are less calories. I agree the goverenments and to society benefits may be affacted. Therafore they must cooking food every day themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, sort of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96356275304 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67983167602 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570850202429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8182472876 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1111111111 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7222222222 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00997656634401 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00354663264927 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00809229270346 0.0667982634062 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0065790072307 0.151304729494 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00930412125261 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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