While it is true that the introduction of mobile phones has made a huge impact on everyone's life regardless of age. With the increasing engagement in the digital world, there's a disruption in everyone's lifestyle and that has made a huge impact on human relations as well as the social development of individuals. As stated by the author that due to this trend has to lead to more conflicts and differences between the people as well as an impact on economic losses.
The argument also states that due to this rage there have been assaults, property damage among the people. With such incidents, there are possibilities of confrontations amongst the people which can lead to civil unrest and have a huge impact on the social-economic loss to the country. Also, with the increasing addiction to phones, it can lead to mental distress and it can distort, mental health which can have an adverse effect on the children as well as the individuals. There have been some cases reported that due to the parent's attention in the mobile phones they sometimes forget to take care of their offsprings and due to this there are many reported cases of injuries and loss of lives due to lack of attention since children's are playful and require constant attention.
Additionally, the experimental project undertaken by Middletown shows that banning phones on the pedestrian street has lead to a positive outcome and it has made significant progress in the reported cases of rage amongst each other. Such ideas can be fruitful beyond social-economic losses, it has also helped an individual to spend more time with their family members as well as enjoy the surroundings. Traffic on pedestrian streets has become uniform and symmetric due to which government can save money by reducing resources required to reported assaults, thefts occurring before.
Such policies can lead to a better lifestyle and also help the government to maintain unity and social harmony amongst people in the country. Also, due to less number of reported cases, there's increased mobility and less fuel loss which can save a lot of money amongst the individuals.
A united, socially and economically developed nation can uplift the happiness index of the individuals which can help them to grow and enhance their better outcomes. Such policies should be implemented nationwide and it can lead to better integrity amongst the people with less rage and criminal cases.
e-rater score report
Out of topic. This is not an issue GRE topic.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 402 350
No. of Characters: 2000 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.478 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.975 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.762 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.207 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.399 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.646 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While it is true that the introduction of mob...
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...easing engagement in the digital world, theres a disruption in everyones lifestyle and...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...een some cases reported that due to the parents attention in the mobile phones they som...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
..., due to less number of reported cases, theres increased mobility and less fuel loss w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, as to, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 402.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06467661692 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80801590856 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457711442786 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0204039151 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.428571429 119.503703932 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 23.324526521 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0434912474725 0.218282227539 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0185427250359 0.0743258471296 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244537454379 0.0701772020484 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0247291416509 0.128457276422 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173740313141 0.0628817314937 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.3799401198 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.3550499002 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 98.500998004 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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