In many countries there are people with extremely high income. Some say it is good for the country, while others claim that governments should limit salaries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is widely accepted that ''money is not god but it is not less than god''. Presently, some people argue that extremely high incomes attained by some particular people are worthwhile for social, personal and economic development. However, others claim that it has more drawbacks than benefits. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my perception.
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