In these days,incresing number of people buy things online which will leads to shutting down of small shops in town as well bigger cities.In my opinion benifits are more significant than drawbacks.
On one hand, online shopping are greater feature of selecting the products.one good example,if you want to look any items you can enlarge and gothrough in details about the products and its specifications which will help you in knowing abouts the products.
Another instance, where you find everything in one platform which is less time consuming and hassle free.Since people are busy with their work, they cant move out and buys the things.So, purchasing online was the better way.
On other hand, there is high demand of buying the things on internet increasing number of people can set up their own business and definately will help in succeeding.For instance create your own website depends on your locality and needs of people.
It create many job opportunities like packing and delivering the things in right way of direction will help people in thier income and well being.
In conclusion,online shopping has given much opportunities according to public comfort level.The idea of internet will make down of all shopping centers closure.I personaaly believe its welcome development
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Since
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Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30097087379 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87078365822 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.5224436325 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.0 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3333333333 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233645831376 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108486032805 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713872640376 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108486032805 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713872640376 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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