The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
Summarise the informstion by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the process of instant noodles production.
Overall, it can be seen that, there are eight stages and each step playing important role for making product. Thus, it takes a considerably long time.
The first process is bring the flour from the storage silos tank and put in to the mixer with water and oil. After this, the dough sheets exported from mixer by rotters to the dough strips line. Five stage is noodles discs task. The doughs cut and pressed by machine, after the noodles disc process, the semi-finished product is cooked in oil and dried. This cooked and dried product is then sent to the packaging section. In this part, vegetables and spices are added to it. In the final stage, the product is sealed and labels on the packaging and then placed in boxes. All processes are complete, now the products are ready for sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us, it takes a considerably long time. The first process is bring the flour fro...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...ably long time. The first process is bring the flour from the storage silos tank a...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'noodles'' or 'noodle's'?
Suggestion: noodles'; noodle's
...s cut and pressed by machine, after the noodles disc process, the semi-finished product...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e final stage, the product is sealed and labels on the packaging and then placed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22659680529 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7341763857 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9090909091 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0604439385632 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320907510646 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745119114657 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943181089922 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117794150983 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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