The graph illustrates the unemployment proportion of people who live in rural and urban areas in Australia in 2012.
Overall, looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the urban areas' unemployment percentage experienced an upward trend. However, although the amount in rural areas fell slightly, this still registered the higher figures.
In the beginning, the unemployment situation in rural areas dropped significantly to 5 percent in the second quarter, at which point this number rise moderately to 5.3 percent. An opposite trend was witnessed in urban areas, which considerably increase to 4 percent in quarter 2, followed by the considerable fall to about 2 percent.
After the unemployment rate in rural areas fluctuated during the third second, this figure ended up with accurately 5 percent. Meanwhile, the amount in urban areas grew from 2 percent to 4 percent in the third second, after which that rate gradually climb to almost 5 percent at the end of the period.
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at l 90
- The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities Derby and Nottingham Between 2000 and 2009 73
- Some people think young people should be free to choose their job while others believe that they should be realistic and think about their future Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...t is immediately obvious that the urban areas unemployment percentage experienced an ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, still, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.225 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93938769134 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3279404005 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969977459014 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569196060648 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670601122657 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800396356671 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697861845623 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.