The bar chart illustrates the OPEC and non-OPEC countries data, the production of oil in the world. the charts depict million barrels /day.
Overall, The highest increase in per day barrel by OPEC Middle East, and the second rise by other OPEC countries but in the last decades, there is steady growth found between OPEC and other OPEC countries. initially, the other OPEC was not in the picture.
The Non-OPEC are shown most fluctuations. In the years 1980 -2000, the production was about 8 per-cent higher than OPEC Middle East, however, in 2000-10 there was a tremendous decrease in the production nearly 4per-cent on the other hand OPEC Middle East shows approximately 5 per-cent rise. and in 2010-20 there is a huge change was measured a 15 % rise in production even though, Non-OPEC shows only 2% this was the overall scenario of Non-OPEC and OPEC Middle East.
The other OPEC was initially not showing any production. they start their production in 2000-10 which was equal to the Non-OPEC approximately 5per-cent. However, in 2010-20 the production shows tremendous down and it was measured only 2 per-cent which very small in comparison with OPEC Middle East.
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- The bar chart below shows the production of the world s oil in OPEC and non OPEC countries Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0618556701 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64562705947 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530927835052 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.0270371056 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299332765118 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168398322153 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109727233395 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236145885643 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849650911036 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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