Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Presently, money is considered by majority people to be one of the most important contributing factors towards happiness. However, it is possible for people to be happy even with little money and other aspects of life can play a more vital role in creating happiness. Factors truly responsible for attaining real happiness are discussed in further paragraphs.
Firstly, although having money brings happiness to a lot of people, it does not necessarily follow that people without money are, therefore, unhappy. Most prominent thing in every person’s life is the family relations and are the core source of happiness. For example, comparing the developing and the developed countries, most Westerners would agree that people in developing countries are happier, enjoy stronger family connections and take more pleasure in the simplicities of life to a greater extent than those in developed countries.
Secondly, other way that people can gain happiness is through their work. For instance, a doctor volunteering in underdeveloped countries may have very little money but the reward of helping people and doing the job they are good at, brings happiness in itself. In other words, happiness can be found by using skills that people are trained for and through job satisfaction.
Finally, another factor influencing happiness is having supportive and loving people in one’s life. While money may bring the opportunities to enjoy pleasures, few people would enjoy them on their own. Being surrounded by loving and caring friends is considered by most people to be more valuable than any amount of money.
In conclusion, money is not essential for happiness, which can be found through job satisfaction as well as family. When more people strived in life towards true happiness rather than money, the world would be a better place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 965.302439024 161% => OK
No of words: 292.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32191780822 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81155832216 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544520547945 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2802350911 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 5.23603664747 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439199984714 0.215688989381 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172809742189 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811866954379 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270053419525 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766787049308 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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