Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it replace face to face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this era, technology plays a huge role in everyday tasks and it also becomes famous in education system as a distance learning. Some people believe that because of their positive impacts, it will took place of conventional education. However, others opine that traditional education will not alter. This easy will discuss both prospectives.
To commence with, there are plentiful advantages of e-learning. Firstly, online education system is time consuming for both students and teachers. For instance, students can get their education from anywhere while using smart technology without going to educational institutions and teachers record their lessons and deliver it to all classes at same time. Secondly, there is no need to allocate money to build brick and mortar classrooms as well as setting up system for heaters, air conditioner and other equipments.
On the other hand, interactive learning is dominated online education with enormous factors. In this learning process children have an opportunity to learn about diverse culture. For example, In brick and mortar classrooms they meet with different people from different societies, as a result they learn new things. Moreover, children are under the supervision of teachers which is important for those students who are lazy and unable to do self- study. At last, but not least traditional institutes give them a chance to participate in co-activities which is not included in online education.
In conclusion, not doubt e-learning have some positive impacts but according to me, conventional education is mandatory for comprehensive development of children.
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| 2021-02-02 | dreamscore | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55421686747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95633616993 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9203376512 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223532062085 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799678363313 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595174087027 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13533774633 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243837791176 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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