Technology has evolved since the Inventions took place. It only made our survival easier than making it more complicated. It is due to the following reasons.
Inventing computers has become a revolution in 1980's. People liked how the work is done effortlessly with the help of a machine. Later when, Emails are discovered, the communication was made easier that a person in one corner of the world can be able to communicate with the person at other corner of the world through Internet. But this is not the situation in 1950's. There hasn't been a proper mode of communication, people used to communicate through letters. It used to take a long time to reach the reciever. The to-and-fro communication between the sender and the reciever would have taken atleast a month. In that case, people used to wait for the reply, they are unsure whether it is reached to the right address or not. These days we have mail reciepts that says if the person has opened the mail or not. As it evolved a lot more, we have got the chance to communicate from smartphones itself. Its just we need to send the other person a message and it is delivered in Micro seconds. It is such a tremendous change in the world of Technology. Inventing new things only made our lives easier.
Day-by-Day there is a rapid increase in number of users, there is updation to the existing technology. People are adopting to the new changes that are made in this digital world. Previously, we do not have online delivery of clothes, daily essentials, electronic goods and many other items. This is now possible with the changing technology and the ability to use it even by a common man. In addition to it, If we have a cricket match or a football match going on at Southafrica, one can view it from his home, by streaming the sport on an application. If this feature wasn't there, it wouldn't be possible for the all the sports fans to visit the stadium and watch it live. Technology brought things closer to us and has become a part of our lives.
Furthermore, The scientists who work relentlessly to invent something new are able to use advanced technologies as well as advanced equipments to carry on with their research. If they do not have it available, the inventions wouldn't have happened. Consider a case, where rockets visit the space and finds out if there is life out there apart from earth or not. This was only possible with the latest inventions being made, which they made use of it to test the survival at the space. Thats how we got to know, that there is a medium chance of us to survive at the Mars. In general, An invention is made by making use of another invention which was previously made. It not only helps them, but also gives out the valuable truth to the public. Creative Innovations are made and helps in upbringing the talent from the youth.
Thinking the other way around, if innovations aren't made, people lack the truth, and the daily work might become difficult for them as everything is relied on the inventions made. Although people these days are addicted to smartphones and laptops, which divides their family apart as children are not involved in the family discussions. But, if these are in control and gadgets are used properly, such things won't occur.
On a whole, I conclude that, Technology is essential to a human being if they want to make their life easier. Many Inventions help people to grow as a person, understand things and nurture themselves. I believe it is considered as a boon than bane.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
...nting computers has become a revolution in 1980s. People liked how the work is done effo...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1950s'.
Suggestion: in the 1950s
...Internet. But this is not the situation in 1950s. There hasnt been a proper mode of comm...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...is is not the situation in 1950s. There hasnt been a proper mode of communication, pe...
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Line 5, column 570, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...port on an application. If this feature wasnt there, it wouldnt be possible for the a...
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Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...cation. If this feature wasnt there, it wouldnt be possible for the all the sports fans...
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Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lives'?
Suggestion: lives
... fans to visit the stadium and watch it live. Technology brought things closer to us...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...o not have it available, the inventions wouldnt have happened. Consider a case, where r...
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Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...f it to test the survival at the space. Thats how we got to know, that there is a med...
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Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ng the other way around, if innovations arent made, people lack the truth, and the da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, well, apart from, in addition, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2898.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 621.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6405796905 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 918.0 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2101341978 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3243243243 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7837837838 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.51351351351 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.83258426966 435% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989741345838 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253356388267 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381817865291 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604143336714 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299773642777 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
...nting computers has become a revolution in 1980s. People liked how the work is done effo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1950s'.
Suggestion: in the 1950s
...Internet. But this is not the situation in 1950s. There hasnt been a proper mode of comm...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...is is not the situation in 1950s. There hasnt been a proper mode of communication, pe...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 570, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...port on an application. If this feature wasnt there, it wouldnt be possible for the a...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...cation. If this feature wasnt there, it wouldnt be possible for the all the sports fans...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lives'?
Suggestion: lives
... fans to visit the stadium and watch it live. Technology brought things closer to us...
^^^^
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...o not have it available, the inventions wouldnt have happened. Consider a case, where r...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...f it to test the survival at the space. Thats how we got to know, that there is a med...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ng the other way around, if innovations arent made, people lack the truth, and the da...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, well, apart from, in addition, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2898.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 621.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6405796905 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 918.0 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2101341978 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3243243243 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7837837838 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.51351351351 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.83258426966 435% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989741345838 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253356388267 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381817865291 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604143336714 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299773642777 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.