Some people believe that earth is being harmed by human activities;others, however, feel that human activities make it a better place to live in.
It is true that the world is being damage by human activities but Mankind make good place the earth. I have given below both sides view and my own opinion.
For human activities, day by day increasing drawback of world. Firstly, we can say that industry and private car is increasing rapidly as a result, world is facing environment changes. That is why, it is a large problem of the world. Secondly,people are not allow government policy. This reason,public to do anything as a result people are not understand about surrounding and they are not maintain proper regulation. Then world is getting slowly waste. Finally, for human activities, among the world, raising various types of problems such as, water pollution, air pollution, sound pollution, and so on.
For mankind ply among earth where world is being a decent area. Also, human try to better places the world. That is why, they have discovered many technology and it made easy the world where try to apply new invention the earth, most of apply has been successful and it made the world more fantastic. Furthermore, most of the people they have cultivated many things across the earth and it is more natural beauties and earn more money. That is why,having development many countries. In addition,all of country government taking good step to maintain climate change as a result world will stay a decent place.
In conclusion, in my own opinion, the earth is being damage for mankind and some of country and public try to stay a good area the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , public
...not allow government policy. This reason,public to do anything as a result people are n...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...tand about surrounding and they are not maintain proper regulation. Then world is gettin...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun technology seems to be countable; consider using: 'many technologies'.
Suggestion: many technologies
...orld. That is why, they have discovered many technology and it made easy the world where try to...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... made easy the world where try to apply new invention the earth, most of apply has been succe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...most of apply has been successful and it made the world more fantastic. Furthermo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , having
...eauties and earn more money. That is why,having development many countries. In addition...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
... development many countries. In addition,all of country government taking good step ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84555984556 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68114402182 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544401544402 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3731447526 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4375 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176848309662 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664632521504 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948801125105 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129716178338 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726340883506 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.