Nowadays, life is full of stress and compitition. In these situations,exercise is good for health. So , in my opinion there are more benefit for children and teenagers.In my opinion, physical education is compursrly as a subject in school period.
In a first side, physical education and sports activities as a subject if compursly in school. Moreover, children and teenagers are not participate in outdoor activities,preferly consider their attention on study.After long time , they feel
tired because healthy mind in healthy body,so with physical activities they feel fresh and active.
Apart from this, humans make community by outdoor activities. People meet each others in parks, gems and yoga centres and they discuss views and create friendly environment.Rather than,pupil dedicating tremendous ideas.
In the conclusion, overall point of view that physical education and activities is necessary for human being. Fresher mind in fresher body,so indoors and outdoors activity both are necessary,
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...their attention on study.After long time , they feel tired because healthy mind ...
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...red because healthy mind in healthy body,so with physical activities they feel fres...
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...m this, humans make community by outdoor activities. People meet each others in ...
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...community by outdoor activities. People meet each others in parks, gems and yoga...
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...h others in parks, gems and yoga centres and they discuss views and create frien...
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...yoga centres and they discuss views and create friendly environment.Rather than,...
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... views and create friendly environment.Rather than,pupil dedicating tremendous ideas....
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...uman being. Fresher mind in fresher body,so indoors and outdoors activity both are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, apart from, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78523489933 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3451772682 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691275167785 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.9561672104 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175919037988 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754481103158 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760002511132 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884071019745 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723667466716 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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