There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
Global warming is a matter of concern which needs the urgent attention from government representatives across the globe. This problem has affected all at the nation level as well as at individual level. The following essay will elaborate the causes which tend to increase in temperature along with its probable solutions.
Rise in temperature in our atmosphere is an alarming situation and it is the high time we act upon it. One of the examples of this is melting of glacier’s ice in Antarctica which can grab the adjacent areas in water due to addition in water level day by day. Firstly, pollution emitted by vehicle on the road and factories tend to rise in temperature. Secondly, deforestation is the main cause that accelerates the pollution level. For example, trees and plants take carbon-dioxide and exhale oxygen for us. It is because of plants, we can breathe clean air. Too much carbon in the air leads to depletion of ozone layer, which in turn refers to arrival of UV rays inside the earth atmosphere and rise in heat level.
On the other hand, there can be solutions of this at the government level as well as individual level. We can start using public transport as much as it is possible for travelling instead of our private vehicles. Factories owner can substitute the fossil fuels with the clean energy sources in order to remit less amount of CO2 in the air. At the same time, government is expected to promote the clean energy sources and conducting awareness campaigns for environmental issues. It is expected to provide a convenient transport system for public.
This essay has discussed the evidences of man-made activities that leads to rise in temperature and its possible solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...temperature and its possible solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93793103448 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81675807275 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.895390531 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17788166895 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056054779133 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822245623689 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145739694611 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119741029495 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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