The graphs illustrate the employment of graduated Anthropology students from one university and the income of them over the course of 5 years.
Overall, looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the number of anthropologists has full-time job registers the highest figures. In addition, the proportion of those who have more than $100,00 salaries in freelance consultants and government sector is the largest percentage.
To start with, the percentage of anthropologists work full time plays a majority with 52%. Meanwhile, this amount of those who study postgrad full-time and have not known yet are significantly smaller (8%). The number of unemployed students is just over one-tenth (around 12%), which is lower than those who have part-time work (15%). Finally, the percentage of anthropology students who have part-time work as well as postgrad study accounts for an inconceivable about 5%.
In another perspective, those who work at private companies and have a $50,00 salary only have the highest percentage compared to other amounts of income. Meanwhile, this salary just plays a minority about 15% in the government sector and freelance consultants. In the government sector, the rate of anthropologists who have more than $100,000 income plays one second. This amount of salary in freelance consultants is just about 40 percent which is similar to those who have from $75,00 to $99,999 income.
- Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security But others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Analysts tell us that many people feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over thier live What problems do such feeling causes for people What remedies should you suggest 11
- Some people think young people should be free to choose their job while others believe that they should be realistic and think about their future Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured 61
- Some people believe that hosting international sports events is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both these views and state your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...number of anthropologists has full-time job registers the highest figures. In addit...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... the percentage of anthropologists work full time plays a majority with 52%. Meanwhile, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, second, well, while, in addition, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29596412556 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02375853649 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520179372197 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.076184798 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.23603664747 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106728077648 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515386804485 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456355927583 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879566902202 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582035864333 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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