Dear Mr. Singh,
I am writing this letter to request a copy of P6 Assessment book by EPH Publishing House. Apparently, all the book stores nearby Changi Simei Zone 3 are running out of stock. Last that I visited Popular book store was about two days ago and they are still awaiting new stock arrivals to be delivered to their location.
As you are aware that primary school leaving examinations are of utmost priority for all the parents nowadays, hence they have already picked up their respective copies much in advance leaving me with less hope to find one in my area. This book has the exact compilation of the past ten years questions that are expected to come for the upcoming exams. Since I need to read it first and then get my daughter to start practicing these questions prior to her preliminary examinations thus I would like to request the latest version of this book to be delivered at my permanent address as soon as possible. Also, if there is a possibility of express service am willing to pay extra over and above the market price. Lastly, do advise me on the method of payment you prefer payments via cash on delivery or online payment directly to your bank account.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
Nur Amirah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hter to start practicing these questions prior to her preliminary examinations th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, hence, if, lastly, look, so, still, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72072072072 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49609710769 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711711711712 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6819481378 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217400398333 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635472820005 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230939888038 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107834100612 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630827453452 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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