You are looking for a part time job.write a letter to an employment agency.In your letter:Intriduce your self.explain what sort of job you would like.Say what experience and skills you have.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in connection with part-time job article displayed in yesterday newspaper. I am international student from India and currently studying for a Master’s in Oxford university Melbourne.
From the jobs enlisted by you I am perfect for the accountant manager as I have done my graduation in account management and further pursuing master’s for it. I can work on weekdays for 4 hours from 12 pm to 6 pm which would be the best time after my college is over.
I have all the required skills to fit for this job. I am good typist and computer literate. Moreover, well equipped with communication skills in all three most common languages French, Punjabi, English. In addition, to this I have fulltime experience of one year from overseas in this field and other details are listed in my resume attached with this letter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you,
Your faithfully,
Ravinder
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| 2021-02-23 | Ravindersidhu | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he required skills to fit for this job. I am good typist and computer literate. M...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...i, English. In addition, to this I have full time experience of one year from overseas in...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...th this letter. I am looking forward to hear from you, Your faithfully, Ravind...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87898089172 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85097135177 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668789808917 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4743235816 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234546632863 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906427718546 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615697227446 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128600344047 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165773469617 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.