Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
The way that our society has evolved during the last years has demonstrated the possibility to identify people from different cultures and personality by only see the way that they select clothes. Part of this change is due to the marketing style used for many retail clothes companies. The way that they merchandise their product has produced an impact in the society. However, I disagree on that. Many people select their clothes without thinking on their own culture or character. People only selects their clothes based on their budget and preferences, nothing else.
Firstly, I would like to mention that cloth companies try to sell their clothes based on people preference but influenced by their own cultures and behaviors. This has been always a hide message from those companies. For example, there is a company called Benetton where they tried to influence people to buy cloths from them in order to show some kind of preferences for certain human races and differentiate them from others. Thus, Benneton’s marketing idea was pretty good from the beginning, but I do not believe was fair and put others in difficult situation.
Secondly, I would like to emphasize that despite cloth sellers are always aiming to influence people to buy certain types of clothes, people still have the choice to wear anything they want without thinking on what other people may judge and what sector of the population belongs to. We as a society we need to stop criticizing people based on what they wear. A clear example is what I have told my family in regards of respecting people on what they believe instead of what they can afford to pay for clothes.
In summary, I would emphasize that despite cloth companies trying to influence people to buy certain clothes to show something that they do not believe, we as society need to reinforce that clothes do not tell nothing about people and people are free to choice what they want to wear without any other means.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...r example is what I have told my family in regards of respecting people on what they believe ...
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Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: NOT_NOTHING[1]
Message: Double negation. You probably should say 'anything'.
Suggestion: anything
...d to reinforce that clothes do not tell nothing about people and people are free to cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88622754491 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50727365272 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502994011976 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4132817726 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287498896799 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102876988072 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662600324124 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183950981115 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625263187298 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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