Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need or can't afford.
What is the reason for this behavior?
What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
A great number of people become debtors because of the habit of purchasing items they do not need or cannot afford. This behavior stems from the effects of advertisements, and to prevent people from having this problem, advertisements should be managed strictly.
Owing to the impacts of advertisements, more and more people tend to buy goods that are not necessary or even unaffordable, leading to debt. Advertisements on television or social media, such as Facebook, can be enticing, which eventually creates an impulse to purchase the promoted goods even though they are not essential at that moment. In case the goods are too expensive, these people may use their credit cards or borrow money from friends or relatives to buy the goods. For example, in Vietnam, a high portion of young adults are intrigued by Apple's advertisements and borrow money from the bank or friends just to buy the company's latest products.
A possible solution to prevent people from having this problem is to strictly control advertisements shown on mass media. These companies must not be allowed to falsify and exaggerate their products' use and benefits in their advertisements. If such misleading advertisements are shown, the companies should be fined heavily by the government. For instance, in the US, if an advertisement is claimed to be misleading and providing incorrect information about the product, the company must immediately stop the advertising campaign and pay a fine of up to $10,000.
In conclusion, the behavior of people getting into debt by buying unnecessary and unaffordable goods is mainly caused by advertisements. To mitigate and prevent the problem, strict laws and control over advertisements should be conducted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'companys the latest'.
Suggestion: companys the latest
...rom the bank or friends just to buy the companys latest products. A possible solution to pre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29454545455 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15288455097 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.656053717 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301366332233 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113182547893 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877212549755 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202108595737 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821428027871 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.